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The dove cry calls
but i've no ear to heed it.
nor eyes to see it.
Im drowning in blood, blood of my family,
that my family spilt.
Theres no time in this world for me,
the stars are bright, but in my blindess
i dont see them.
And i wish this wicked curse had piced anyone
but me.
Theres war between these walls.
wars that are destested,
take place none the less.
and that what we hate, is that what we indulge.
lamentations unapprovable i've no chance to wish.
these walls are closing in, we all of us collide.
we're brough together, guns and knifes amass nothing but blood.
we're a singing choir of voiceless angels,
unheard shouts that plaque our cerebral walls.
i've nothing ro run or cry.
this lifetime taught me that
these walls are made of paper,
yet breaking them is impossible.
i hate this war because im on the other side,
tell me,
when will i be free?
i feel so claustrophobic,
i need to run free of these walls,
or are these walls an invention of my mind?
and breaking free is nothing but a fantasy?
©2008-2009 ~Alucardsbloodlust
:iconalucardsbloodlust:

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this poem isnt about divorce, but the songs still good for it.

all i wanted to do was listen to starry night by don mclean
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^starry night.

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:iconchaotic-canine:
Love the emotion of the poem... My poetic writing teacher told me that the best poems are written with the voice of experience and the eye of emotion! You did an excellent job on this!

Oh... because I'm a complete weirdo with spell check: picked in the stanza- wicked curse had piced
^^;

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Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
:iconalucardsbloodlust:
hah thanx. you actually have a poetic teacher?

and i tried to edit it, cause there are a few things that need editing but it wouldnt process and comp was pissing me off soo...i left it ^^

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Labour Without Joy is Base. Labour Without Sorrow Is Base. Sorrow Without Labour is base. Joy Without Labour Is base.- John Ruskin.
"Memories a poor thing to have. its your own real hair and eyes and hands and mouth i want."-Philip Pullman
:iconchaotic-canine:
Yeah... That's what I said when I saw it! "Poetic Writing class! Really?" O_o

Yeah, I was super pissed off at dA's new edit profile crap... I about slammed my fist into the monitor! >_<

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Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
:iconalucardsbloodlust:
good idea. monitor slapping...hmm ^^

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Labour Without Joy is Base. Labour Without Sorrow Is Base. Sorrow Without Labour is base. Joy Without Labour Is base.- John Ruskin.
"Memories a poor thing to have. its your own real hair and eyes and hands and mouth i want."-Philip Pullman
:iconchaotic-canine:
^^; I know, I need anger management! ^_^

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Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
:icondyingroses:
i love this one. it gives me a good sort of image in my head [i like that about when i read poetry]
:iconalucardsbloodlust:
your more gratious than my poetry deserves. thankyou.

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Labour Without Joy is Base. Labour Without Sorrow Is Base. Sorrow Without Labour is base. Joy Without Labour Is base.- John Ruskin.
"Memories a poor thing to have. its your own real hair and eyes and hands and mouth i want."-Philip Pullman
:icondyingroses:
i love your poetry. its amazing. so hush it deserves it lol.
:iconalucardsbloodlust:
if you say so...

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Labour Without Joy is Base. Labour Without Sorrow Is Base. Sorrow Without Labour is base. Joy Without Labour Is base.- John Ruskin.
"Memories a poor thing to have. its your own real hair and eyes and hands and mouth i want."-Philip Pullman

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